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I made this :)

2nd flash i did, new one coming soon :) longer and smoother

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:iconshadowninja95:
pretty good for a first flash. But i do recommend if u dont already, union skinning. Also, your character during the flip seems to change size alot, put the head, which i recommend to use the circle tool for, on a seperate layer and try to keep a constant distance from the wall during the flip, so the head acts sort of as a place holder. Also, for stick animating i recommend around 18-24 fps. Your realistic physics is lacking as the flip didnt seem to gain or lose momentum, but ull get the hang of that if u keep at it. The blood was good, thought if u want to be more realistic, when making the blood, zoom into about 200-400 and use a small brush for blood drops and such. With tweening, use the ease tool. Especially for the levitating magician. and yeah i guess thats all the feed back i can give right now. Fairly good for a first flash again, and the main thing is to practice practice practice :D. (oh and it helps to look at flashes online. I recommend newgrounds, its the biggest flash community ever, and loads of talent.)

Peace out. hope this helped

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:iconbatistick13:
Thanks for the feedback, as a beginner flash it helps loads right now in the stages of learning i am in. I will deffinatly check out newgrounds for some inspiration and when i start my next flash ill be looking on this comment as a guideline and it should help me a lot. Thanks again :XD:
:iconshadowninja95:
heh. NP

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:iconslumpythedwarf:
ahahaha cool x)

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:iconbatistick13:
yeah, just wait for my next flash, even better :) should be out, by the time i figuer out what im doing for the last 10 seconds, hehe i have bad artists block right now
:iconslumpythedwarf:
awww poop. I know how that sucks. hope inspiration hits!
I find completely ignoring everything art-related helps.

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yeah i might have to do that for a couple days. completely forget about it, then come back.

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